Silver

Ad for Facebook.

Positives: Good camera angles and editing

Improvements: Slow down voice over. . . it was a bit fast. The comparison of a chair to Facebook was a very difficult task.

Positives: Creative way to present the product, the concept was good! Great use of multiple images to create impact to the viewer.

Improvements: The narrative was hard to understand because of the fast pace. Audio could have been improved.

Positives: Good script and shot composition.

Improvements: Wall to wall music, and now sound effects. Graphic at the end felt rushed.