Ad for Facebook.
Positives: Good camera angles and editing
Improvements: Slow down voice over. . . it was a bit fast. The comparison of a chair to Facebook was a very difficult task.
Positives: Creative way to present the product, the concept was good! Great use of multiple images to create impact to the viewer.
Improvements: The narrative was hard to understand because of the fast pace. Audio could have been improved.
Positives: Good script and shot composition.
Improvements: Wall to wall music, and now sound effects. Graphic at the end felt rushed.