2nd Place :: Division AA

Bathroom

Oswego East

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

Video shows the paranoia students feel when they have to use the bathroom during class. It encourages students to use the bathroom before class so they don't have to leave and miss important learning.

Judge 1

Positives: This is a very entertaining approach to a funny concept. Great use of visual effects, shot variety, editing and pacing to create an entertaining PSA.

Improvements: Next time, help the audience understand "why this matters". The description in your entry states it, but the message is not clear in the video. Keep up the great work!

Judge 2

Positives: Great editing, the cuts matched the music well and conveyed the emotion you were going for perfectly. The variety of sounds you used also gave the video a humorous feel.

Improvements: Some of the shots could have used a tripod. I would also consider a different font at the end.

Judge 3

Positives: Loved the sound effects and visual effects, they worked well together. You did a great job telling a story with out using a lot of words, people often have a hard time doing that well.

Improvements: Don't let the teacher smile while saying "use the bathroom before class." She had a grin on her face and would have been a little better had she looked more serious. You could have used an open graphic to start the video off. I think the coloring of the main character could have been a little better, but that is me nitpicking as I thought this video was outstanding.