Commercial for Jack Links Beef Jerky - Messin' with Ditella
Positives: Good angle shots and title at the end.
Improvements: Identify teacher as Ditella and not give free advertising to McDonalds. Not sure if loosening the salt shaker top is living on the wild side.
Positives: Variety of shots throughout. Humor created appeal for the product.
Improvements: Sound was not consistent in production. (loud and soft) Organization could have been better.
Positives: Funny End, I liked the use of out door presence to create juxtaposition
Improvements: A rehash of the current Jack Link's advertising campaign, could have maybe used a little more originality. And the commercial felt drawn out and too long.