How shoes can bring a couple to love.
Positives: nice story. simple execution.
Improvements: cinematography
Positives: Good cross-cutting between the characters Nice tie in between their feet being in position to fit together and then the logo doing the same
Improvements: Cut out the hand holding shot at the end, let the viewer make the connection by reading their facial expressions and body language Choose music with just a bit of payoff when they finally get together. Not too big, just a subtle swell that says this may be the beginning of something
Positives: Very cute, creative idea. And I like the animation at the end. It fits well with the rest of the spot.
Improvements: The video quality is a little dull, but I really like the whole spot.