Bronze

Call Me Maybe - Commercial - School Code: P

Homewood-Flossmoor

Commercial

Entry Description

Ad for an upcoming volleyball match.

Judge 1

Positives: Editing and dancing

Improvements: need audio from the interior of the bus. No connection to volleyball until after the end tag

Judge 2

Positives: Great energy, makes the viewer want to attend the event. Well shot, on the moving bus with girls lip syncing.

Improvements: Audio mix: VO comes in a bit too hot. Shoot the girls in a variety of locations instead of only onthe bus.

Judge 3

Positives: Editing was nice; it wasn't just one long, boring shot.

Improvements: I would like to have seen a more creative approach. This didn't really make me want to go see the game. Also, while you chose the catchiest song of the year, I'm not sure it really fit what the commercial was for.