Silver

Waist Up Imprinted Sportswear

Barrington

Commercial

Entry Description

An advertisement for a local t-shirt company called Waist Up. They've got you covered from the Waist Up!

Judge 1

Positives: good info on the service provided and good visual demo on the process

Improvements: poor video quality and store location details missing.

Judge 2

Positives: Split screens work well for showing more content in less time. T-shirt creation sequence is good.

Improvements: Show a few more finished examples of work the shop has done and differentiate the product from other custom shirt shops. Maybe choose more interesting music and a stronger voiceover talent.

Judge 3

Positives: Nice camera work and editing.

Improvements: This just looked like a behind-the-scenes at a t-shirt shop. It didn't really show me what sets them apart, or make me excited about going to them with my business.