Gold

 

Waking Trailer

Batavia
Movie Trailer

Entry Description

A man, Jeff, gets abruptly abducted to find out that he has something of grave importance. He is soon faced with the decision of whether to give up his own life, or the lives of many. This is a trailer to a 22 minute narrative.

Judge 1

Positives: Good use of effects. Very creative. Good Audio Mix. Liked the closing graphics.

Improvements: Audio at end was hollow. Needed more punch.

Judge 2

Positives: Great energy! Great pace! Love the music track. Nice balance between graphics and live action. Good job!

Improvements: The only 2 real issues I have are the scenes that looked like they were shot on a stage with the black cyc. Always try for a more realistic backgroud / locations. (if possible) In that same area, the lighting was almost too bright. Too much light. Lots of lens flares. If this was not your "intended" location, it gave away that this was a set.

Judge 3

Positives: Good casting, working w/ talent. Edit sequence and choice of shots for trailer were excellent. Well executed.

Improvements: Some of the camera shots / lighting / visual quality was inconsistent. Hard to tell how the story starts / build up to action.