Gold

Redemption

Glenbrook South

Music Video

Entry Description

Moving images tell a story that transcends time, touching on the cyclical nature of life, and the beauty of nature. Music - Exogenesis Symphony Part 3 [Redemption], by Muse

Judge 1

Positives: Nice job on the animation. Good story line. I like the circle symbolism throughout the video. I liked the birds flying shot a lot.

Improvements: The ending is a bit abrupt. (Fade out the music.) The story is definitely clear but I wish there were more visuals to enhance it.

Judge 2

Positives: Nice layering... Especially cut between 0:57 and 0:59. Very creative concept overall! Rarely see a video use this graphic design element. Liked the beginning instrumental of the song.

Improvements: Would prefer no words used in song. May make more of an impact. Story was confusing of mother and son... I thought they died near the middle of the video. Was this supposed to be a circle of life concept? Story a bit unclear. Don't forget to fade music out at the end, and include a key at the beginning and end to give credit.

Judge 3

Positives: Beautiful images. Very creative story. Pacing and editing was very good. Fit the music well.

Improvements: The star background never really changed - maybe adjust the scale of the image, or move the stars around when showing a different perspective. Video had a harsh ending.