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Who Says - Music Video - W

Lyons Township

Music Video

Entry Description

A music video for the song "Who Says", produced by Izzy Manske.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice song. students seem engaged in activity.

Improvements: lip sync out of sync too much, not sure what all the different shots were supposed to indicate. not much variety. singer in the bedroom, in the classroom, violinist, kids sitting in hallway.

Judge 2

Positives: Cool shots and clean editing.

Improvements: The lip syncing was off. The vocals were low in places.

Judge 3

Positives: This was a clean looking video. It was nicely executed.

Improvements: It would have been nice to see more emphasis on the narrative and less on the singer. The narrative could have been better developed, but it didn't have enough screen time.