Bronze

Falcons in Wheaton - Music Video - W2

Wheaton North

Music Video

Entry Description

Rap parody to celebrate Spring Break 2012

Judge 1

Positives: Great writing. Hilarious. Great use of shot variety, framing, angles, editing, lighting . . . . BUT

Improvements: You blew it all with the ending video with the credits. Seriously?? Swearing in a high school video? Ummmm, no.

Judge 2

Positives: The editing was quite polished. I found the wording fun and creative.

Improvements: The closing credits was totally inappropiate. Not cool.

Judge 3

Positives: Great video - you had a nice variety of shots that played well to the music. Also, the composition of the shots in relationship to the composition as a whole makes for a solid video.

Improvements: Some of the shots were a bit awkward (different locations that were never seen again) and it appears that you were just filling time. Also, I sometimes felt like your cellphones also had a minor role in the video (too visible).