Parody of "Under the Sea" promoting the Homecoming dance
Positives: Interesting concept. Like originality of lyrics.
Improvements: vocals seemed off mic - distracting, difficult to understand lyrics. Could have used more CU of chorus at times. Lots of wide shots?
Positives: The characters were animated and totally in to it. Fun to watch.
Improvements: Cute but not so original. The sound should've been in stereo- more appropriate for a music video.
Positives: There was some nice form/function achieved - fisheye and ripple effects.
Improvements: Some of the shooting is a bit choppy and that resulted in choppy editing.