Bronze

Beautiful Disaster - Music Video - O

Hinsdale Central

Music Video

Entry Description

Beautiful Disaster Music Video - O

Judge 1

Positives: Great presentation of this message. Very powerful. Well paced. Smooth shots, Each one helped advance the storytelling.

Improvements: 1) don't think we needed the loser voice over when she tripped - the implication was seen very powerfully. 2) the rewind at the end, I didn't think was needed. The emphasis was there already. You had us with your message up to then. Maybe reframe the shot of the four sitting at the table. Close ups - reaction shots. Watch your lighting also. Some spots too dark to see, other spots too much backlight washes out much of what you want us to see.

Judge 2

Positives: The idea was good and was complimented with good editing.

Improvements: The acting could've been more convincing. Some shots were poorly lit.

Judge 3

Positives: This was a nice execution of narrative give the time allowed.

Improvements: I liked the juxtaposition of the two female leads, but at two instances I was confused if they actually were the same girl. That proved to be distracting.