Gold

Leonard's Lament

Barrington

Humorous Narrative

Entry Description

Superintendent Dr. Tom Leonard's bobblehead has been stolen in an adventurous comedy.

Judge 1

Positives: Editing was great and the use of so many adults was impressive. They weren't bad actors either! The theme was great and so were the graphics. I enjoyed the thought put in for some of the camera angles such as placing the camera in the mini fridge. Well thought out project for sure.

Improvements: There seemed to be an inside joke there that an outside viewer wouldn't get. That connection needs to be more obvious. I felt like I was missing out on something.

Judge 2

Positives: There is much I enjoyed both technically, and creatively with this video. Bringing in the music beds and visuals of past movies was a nice touch. As was the mix of live action and animation. Well done. The shot selections were outstanding. Plenty to edit with and none that looked thrown in just because you shot it. Good composition as well. And how did you get the faculty to act so well?

Improvements: This video plays best to a narrow audience. There are probably inside jokes lost on me that Barrington would howl at. The protagonist and the antagonist looked so similar, it took me a moment to get the final joke. I'm hard pressed to find another criticism.

Judge 3

Positives: Nice editing and acting...very funny

Improvements: Parody but not tiring