Bronze

Sour Patch Kids-commercial-O

Hinsdale Central

Commercial

Entry Description

commercial

Judge 1

Positives: nice character and editing

Improvements: soundtrack and abrupt ending

Judge 2

Positives: I don't understand the story, what it has to do with sour patch and the classroom situation

Improvements: I like the sour patch character, maybe could have done something more dramatic with it.

Judge 3

Positives: Video quality was good. Nice music selection.

Improvements: This could have been edited down into a shorter spot and been more effective. The tag at the end was cut too short. Was the incorrect grammar on the paper (your, instead of you're) intentional?