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Bike Racks-Public Service Announcement-O

Hinsdale Central

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

PSA

Judge 1

Positives: Good promo for the new bike racks at school.

Improvements: Appreciated the humorous approach, but next time, play up the "bike rack fights" or use another method to entice the use of the bike racks. Keep up the good work!

Judge 2

Positives: Starting the video with humor is a great way to get the viewer's attention. The rest of the information is clearly stated and explained well.

Improvements: There were a lot of still wide shots: try using close-ups, or using camera movement. The audio was also slightly too loud and blown out.

Judge 3

Positives: - the concept of using the alarm clock and the time on the screen worked well. - Audio came out very well.

Improvements: - To much head room when people were in the picture. - Joe got cut off in the middle of a word.