In the video "Revenge of the Pez Dispensers", the Pez Dispensers make a return to dominate humanity and the world starting with a local high school.
Positives: interesting shot with hand on piano keys. giant pez dispensers a unique approach
Improvements: overacting on the part of some actors.
Positives: Good special effects to make the Pez dispensers seem giant and to get the missing Alex's head onto one of them at the end. Good use of music to enhance suspense. Good photography in running in the halls and on the stairs sequences.
Improvements: Not quite sure Kermit and Tweety Bird inspire as much fear as you were going for. :-) Perhaps the Darth Vader and StormTrooper dispensers at the end would have been more fearsome being used in the beginning or other more monster-like creatures. Some shots in library held too long, make a couple faster edits there.
Positives: The initial set up of the story worked well Camera work was googd
Improvements: Editing could have been sharper...several jump cuts A little more dialogue could have helped set the story up in a stronger way.