Bronze

coach's corner-news program-O

Hinsdale Central

News Program

Entry Description

news program

Judge 1

Positives: Anchor was excellent. Content intelligent and clear.

Improvements: Too much reliance on graphics in beginning and most of the graphics need to be simpler.. The music was overused and should be kept for accent only, not the whole entry.

Judge 2

Positives: * The set created was great. It looked really professional. * The graphics were also very well done.

Improvements: * Consider breaking up the music used in the background. The music wasn't well-paced with the pace of the discussion. * The interview with the coach may have been better set in an athletic/gym environment. Maybe you could have allowed us to hear the interviewer asking the questions since he and the coach were in the shot.

Judge 3

Positives: The set is really nice and the anchor has a nice engaging speaking voice.

Improvements: No need for quotes or punctuation on the graphic. Also, may want to show the anchor more than just a full screen graphic. And music throughout is a little distracting. Should incorporate more broll (vos).