Commercial for Kia Rio
Positives: The car remained in almost all of the add. The title at the end was great.
Improvements: Take out the blurred shot in the middle of the ad and a little narration would be helpful.
Positives: Variety of shots, and the concept of the overall commercial worked well! Thought the use of zoom in and out emphasized product!
Improvements: Execution of some of the more advanced shots could have been improved. Imagery was blurry at times..
Positives: Good use of sound effects to try and help sell the product. Good and clean representation of the product. Time lapse shot was cool.
Improvements: For a car commercial, the pacing needs to be faster. And I could have used maybe a shot of the interior.