Honorable Mention :: Division A

 

Progressive Fitness

Glenbrook South
Commercial

Entry Description

Sometimes we all need a little motivation to work out. Progressive Sports Performance provides people with more than just "a little" motivation. These people are pushed to their physical limits. This isn't your average gym. This is Progressive Fitness.

Judge 1

Positives: Sound and editing

Improvements: needs to sell the Gym better. Visuals too dark.

Judge 2

Positives: Well shot and edited. Definitely gives the impression that this is a serious gym for people who really work out hard. Good music choice.

Improvements: Better ending shot then the smile. Might be to cliche but a shot of hi standing, smiling with perspiration dripping off him.

Judge 3

Positives: Very nice job. Great visuals, editing, etc.

Improvements: The tagline at the end isn't exactly original.