In the Trailer for "Revenge of the Pez Dispensers" we are trying to promote a dramatic video filled with suspense.
Positives: good sense of humor. text worked in pretty well
Improvements: not really sure where the plot is going. felt a little disjointed thematically.
Positives: There is definitely some suspense going on
Improvements: Most of the acting could be improved...
Positives: At the start, the dissonant sound of the piano keys and allowing it to fade slowly adds to the dramatic effect. The acting at 0:24 is very believable.
Improvements: The change in scene and sound at 0:30 is too abrupt and takes away from the flow of the trailer. Perhaps focus in on the Pez candy at 0:39 would bring focus to the antagonist of the movie.