3rd Place :: Division A

Words I Never Heard in the Bible

Oak Park River Forest

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A young religious girl goes on a journey to find heaven on earth.

Judge 1

Positives: music. some interesting outdoor shots.

Improvements: dialogue difficult to hear at times.

Judge 2

Positives: Double-exposure imagery in open and dream sequence looks terrific. Deep issues to tackle in three minutes. Good for you, going for substance.

Improvements: Audio a little uneven at times, too loud during some music sequences. Difficult to hear her when she wakes from first dream.

Judge 3

Positives: interesting story concept told with very few words good location choices to move the story along

Improvements: a little more dialogue would have been helpful to tell the story