Silver

Shadows

Eisenhower

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

A movie trailer of the horror short "Shadows"

Judge 1

Positives: black & white footage was good choice. music worked well for scenes

Improvements: too many text clips. have more scripted scenes to show more of your ideas

Judge 2

Positives: Very concise rendition of a horror plot ... Great copy lines. Nice end graphic.

Improvements: I wish it was more scary. The audio in the end sounds almost humorous. I am missing scary sounds

Judge 3

Positives: Good build-up towards a suspenseful movie. Focus on one individual and one scene works as a teaser trailer. Music is in keeping with the theme at the start. Good sequence of clips.

Improvements: Not clear on the plot of the movie and a bit of a hint would be helpful in drawing me into the story and deciding to go see the movie. Not sure if the human groan/sigh that starts at 0:46 adds to the mystery or takes away from the idea presented in the clip that the shadow is not human. Why change the music at 0:24?