2nd Place :: Division A

 

Newscene

Oak Park River Forest
News Program

Entry Description

A weekly news program about our high school and community.

Judge 1

Positives: very professional open and lead story. anchors did very nice job. video nicely shot and cut. over the shoulder graphics very nice, too. i like the choice of stories.

Improvements: anchors were wonderful, but could be a little more animated. i wouldn't put them in front of the logo at the end... can't see logo.

Judge 2

Positives: * The stories were clear and well written * Good camera use of tight and wide shots to give perspective

Improvements: * Consider shortening the coaches discussion about the football team * The anchors could've talked over some of the football footage and made it more compelling.

Judge 3

Positives: Nice personalities! Very professional.

Improvements: May want to shorten the opening segment. Capture us quicker.