Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A rogue agent gets revenge.

Judge 1

Positives: some interesting camera shots

Improvements: acting

Judge 2

Positives: Good use of music to heighten suspense. Good editing and selection of shooting venues.

Improvements: Echo in audio in the scene at brick building. Reduce number of fight scenes in the office and lose the knit Mets cap. Hard to invoke fear of someone wearing a pompon on his head.

Judge 3

Positives: Good staging Good camera work & editing

Improvements: Storyline could have been stronger...We get that the main character was blacklisted, but not enough dialogue to completely understand why. Fight scenes could have been shorter