Bronze

How to be a Good Student

Batavia

Demonstration

Entry Description

Steps to becoming the best student you can be.

Judge 1

Positives: A creative approach and I thought the use of graphics and sound effects to transition from topic to topic was excellent.

Improvements: Most of the humor is very good, but sometimes the pacing slowed down a bit. It's tough to keep things funny as opposed to goofy, but you did a pretty good job.

Judge 2

Positives: The editing was good. Good use of humor.

Improvements: The framing of some of the shots was awkward. I like the humor, but a little more subtlety would have been more effective.

Judge 3

Positives: Audio was fine. You used a lot of effects and some of them were good. Good shooting to edit on some of the sequences as well.

Improvements: Refine your concept and take the project serously. Make sure all your shots have the correct color balance and saturation.