This entry in the news category includes the daily news, a sports segment, two toss-downs to reporters, live, and one news package.
Positives: it took courage to do the obit.. nicely done. the interviews on the school performance story were good. i liked the editing on the story as well.
Improvements: should have made transition after obit story.. you went from a sad story to a fun one and the anchor probably should have done the tag and then turned to the other anchor to do the next story. or if it's a single anchor... bring in a box for the second story. also should have seen a picture of the boy who died. try to use natural sound in pieces that involve music, such as the school performance story.
Positives: * Very nice set/desk * Very conversational reads by your anchors
Improvements: * Is it possible to increase the size of your video box behind the anchors? * Or maybe your could have had the anchors voice over the video so the video could be better scene.
Positives: Very professional set and lighting. Great organization.
Improvements: Add a little more personality.