Silver

 

I Shaved

Homewood-Flossmoor
Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

Get involved in helping fight cancer.

Judge 1

Positives: Great message with a clear and simple approach! Really liked the before and after interviews. This made it very effective.

Improvements: Great use of music and the piece was well edited. Next time, improve upon your audio and video quality. Keep up the great work!

Judge 2

Positives: Nice job shooting your subjects from different angles. The visuals were interesting while the script delivered your message well.

Improvements: Some of the shots are very over-saturated. Providing a link to somewhere viewers could donate would be nice.

Judge 3

Positives: Cuts were clean and effective. Timing and pace were well thought out and flowed nicely

Improvements: It didn't sound like the mic was on during the first half. Lighting could use some improvement.