Get involved in helping fight cancer.
Positives: Great message with a clear and simple approach! Really liked the before and after interviews. This made it very effective.
Improvements: Great use of music and the piece was well edited. Next time, improve upon your audio and video quality. Keep up the great work!
Positives: Nice job shooting your subjects from different angles. The visuals were interesting while the script delivered your message well.
Improvements: Some of the shots are very over-saturated. Providing a link to somewhere viewers could donate would be nice.
Positives: Cuts were clean and effective. Timing and pace were well thought out and flowed nicely
Improvements: It didn't sound like the mic was on during the first half. Lighting could use some improvement.