Music Video created to piggy back off of the same song the summer Olympic swimming team made popular at the end of the summer. The video was shown as a welcome back to school assembly at the beginning of the year, the goal was to show unity by including as many people and groups as possible in the video.
Positives: Cute. For the purpose you made this, it was okay.
Improvements: More creativity in the shots would have enhanced the video. Use of digital effects and creative use of transitions would have enhanced the video. A bit more rehearsal also to help the effectiveness of the lip syncs. Some lighting was too low. a few shaky handheld shots and some out of focus shots.
Positives: I thought the concept was cute. Fun to see students and staff participating.
Improvements: The shot were a bit shaky. The editing needed to go at a faster pace to keep up with the music.
Positives: There was a nice variety of shots. You tried to include a variety of people and you accomplished that
Improvements: The video footage could be of a much higher quality. You claimed your purpose was that this video would function as a welcome back to school, but that narrative is never told.