Gold

In the Mirror

Glenbrook North

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

This is a PSA on eating disorders that I created because as a teenage girl I see how body image is a major problem for my friends. I made this with the hope that at least this could make an impression on at least one person.

Judge 1

Positives: A great message with a very simple and creative approach! A job well done! Really like the sticky notes and the color treatment- black and white beginning, and transitioning to color.

Improvements: Next time, consider your audience and their ability to read the various sticky notes. The editing was a touch too fast for some of those scenes. Keep up the good work!

Judge 2

Positives: Great job with the words stuck to the wall, very creative way to get your point across visually. Changing from black and white to color at the end was also a nice touch.

Improvements: Don't be afraid of hard cuts, you used a lot of fades between shots. The editing could have matched the music better at some parts.

Judge 3

Positives: Very artistic. I enjoyed the lack of color in the video. You used good music for the background.

Improvements: Clean the mirror off before you use it in a shoot. Second set of text on screen was a little fast.