This is a Nike Soccer commercial we created. We are avid soccer fans and wanted to have a commercial that showed the importance of overcoming adversity.
Positives: Storytelling and sound
Improvements: cinematography and editing
Positives: Good concept and music choice
Improvements: Just show the guys face once in the opening sequence. Seconfd piece of VO colud be over action. exersize sequences and final goal shot need more emotion. Sweat, effort and then victory.
Positives: Good camera work. I like the first-person perspective.
Improvements: Editing could be a little quicker/smoother to make the spot feel more exciting.