A spot promoting an LHS football game.
Positives: Editing and soundtrack
Improvements: not much of an idea but served its purpose
Positives: Football sequence following countdown is well edited. Good choice of shots, makes me want to attend the game. Well done for what is being advertised.
Improvements: Once you establish the idea of a digital countdown in the first couple of shots either drop it completely or, when you cut-away to it, leave it on screen for a shorter period of time. More prep shots instead.
Positives: Great job! Nice camera work, editing, music selection, etc.
Improvements: It would have been even better as a 30-second spot.