Gold

 

Ave Maria

Deerfield
Music Video

Entry Description

Produced by Amy Yi this music video is a loving homage to Beyonce's Ave Maria.

Judge 1

Positives: Very nicely done. Some of your transitions, in my opinion, should have been dissolves as opposed to cuts. The end of the relationship was telegraphed at the beginning but HOW it would end was always in doubt (keep them guessing:). The fast rewind of events was a bit unnerving but I understood your decision. Nice framing of shots. Beach shot could have been more steady, but I even understood your decision on that one.

Improvements: See above

Judge 2

Positives: The composition of shots and timely editing.

Improvements: Everything worked.

Judge 3

Positives: You had a nice execution of narrative. Also, you had some nice exposition shots in the beginning.

Improvements: At times the camera was a bit too shaky. This awkwardness worked against you in the rewind sequence of the relationship.