Silver

Dating Abuse

Libertyville

Animation Stop Motion

Entry Description

A call to stop dating abuse.

Judge 1

Positives: The graphics and color scheme were effective. I liked the fact that the look has an edge to it - MTVesque.

Improvements: Get closeups of the bruises and show them fading directly in the project. The purpose of the animated circles and arrows wasn't clear to me until the project was over. Use the camera more. I.E. on the line "This is Ann" go in for a closeup of her and do a fast pull back. DO the same thing with John. You are making an important point. If you made another draft of your project it could be a very powerful piece. Nice work!

Judge 2

Positives: Creative style and good story. Flowed perfectly, telling an important story in a very limited time, which is incredibly challenging.

Improvements: Bruises could have been a little more visible, as they are currently hard to see.

Judge 3

Positives: Good idea - nice coloration - buttons and flowers fit nicely

Improvements: Script needs work. Why is John 40? Hard to see the bruises.