Bronze

Hall Pass How To

Benito Juarez

Demonstration

Entry Description

A training video about how to use the hall pass at school

Judge 1

Positives: Interesting topic. Editing was pretty good inavoiding jump cuts.

Improvements: Lighting and color balance need tweaking. Video had very weak color... no pop to the video.

Judge 2

Positives: I like the humor. Good voice over work.

Improvements: This would have worked better if you had 2 different students, one who did things the right way and the other who did things the wrong way. Continutiy...in one shot the kid was not wearing the hall pass vest and in the next shot he was.

Judge 3

Positives: Schot composition was done well. Good clean audio.

Improvements: The concept was a little too simple. It is never good to just do the minimum or the easiest thing. Don't be afraid to challenge yourself.