Bronze

Surviving the Hallway

Benito Juarez

Demonstration

Entry Description

How to survive the hallways at Juarez

Judge 1

Positives: Clever demonstration topic with pretty well orchestrated scenes.

Improvements: Got a bit repetitious at times. Also, graphics were not consistent. No logic regarding what is capitalized and what is not capitalized.

Judge 2

Positives: I liked the use natural sound. The contrast of what to do and what not to do was good.

Improvements: Graphics should never cover the face of the narrator. The sound effects were a bit overly goofy.

Judge 3

Positives: It was a fun concept. The edits were quick and the sound effects really added to the project.

Improvements: Never put graphics over your subjects face. Make sure your shots are level. Hide your mic cable better.