Bronze

Hall of Fame

Maine South

Music Video

Entry Description

Hall of Fame - The Script Music Video All original footage. You can be a champion in whatever you do.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice concept. I like a lot of the images. The transitions were smooth and seemed to go with the music to emphasize certain words.

Improvements: For me, the addition of more shots, more varied shots, more people doing more things, creative use of transitions and some creative use of special effects could have raise the effectiveness of this several notches.

Judge 2

Positives: Clean camera shots. Nice variety of shots.

Improvements: The repetition of shots in the beginning didn't work quite well. The lighting was a bit faded on some of the int. school shots.

Judge 3

Positives: This was a good start. You had some nice framing of shots and created a nice underlying narrative.

Improvements: There could have been more variety in the selection of shots. That would have helped your narrative have a bit more flow.