2nd Place

How to fix a McLaren

Lake Forest

Demonstration

Entry Description

The steps necessary to optimize one of the highest performance vehicles in the world.

Judge 1

Positives: Very good use of music. Most of the video is shot very well.

Improvements: There were a couple dark shots early in the video that should have been avoided. Even though I loved the way the music and video was edited at the end, I wanted that one drving shot for the finish. Let's show this car actually running!

Judge 2

Positives: Real nice lighting on the closeups of the car. There were some great shots in here.

Improvements: Camera movements are great, but they can be overdone. You were in the realm of overdone panning. It doesn't look real good when you cut from pan to pan to pan.

Judge 3

Positives: Shooting was excellent. Very creative I can tell a lot of time was spent to set everything up. The audio was done perfectly. You feel the sensation of the car through the video.

Improvements: I felt it was a little long at the end with all the beauty shots of the race car but all in it all it was very well done.