That's All She Wrote Movie Trailer All original footage. Tagline: The worst part of this is, is when it all becomes real...
Positives: good use of color & black and white footage. good variety of scenes. plot was well laid out
Improvements: could be a little more variety of music selection. more costume changes to show passage of time
Positives: Very dynamic piece. It creates convincing tension with minimal visual means ...
Improvements: The main idea: "That's all she wrote" could be conveyed more coherently better throughout the sequence
Positives: The use of black and white scenes work well with the color scenes. The music is techno-sounding and in keeping with the action of the trailer. The end of the trailer is good with the incomplete message - leaves the viewer wondering and that's important.
Improvements: The main character should probably end up in the house trying to open the safe to keep with the plot presented at the start of the trailer. At 0:45, not sure who she's running away from.