Silver

Village Music Store

Deerfield

Documentary

Entry Description

In this sweet and intimate profile of The Village Music Store in downtown Deerfield, Jeff Haney captures the innocence and simplicity of a village and its surviving mom and pop store.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice lower thirds. Interesting shots. Like transition from VO to interviewees.

Improvements: Audio pops. The music got a bit distracting at times. Could you have used a lav mic?

Judge 2

Positives: Good use of b-roll, good use of pictures.

Improvements: Interviewee needed a lav mic instead of handheld; needed more light on Joey.

Judge 3

Positives: Good close-ups. Good pace/speed.

Improvements: Could be longer. Lighting could be better during interview of young man.