Silver

Don't Text and Drive

Glenbrook South

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

In working with the Glenbrook South Student Council's push for driving safety, we were asked to produce a public service announcement to promote dedication to safe driving.

Judge 1

Positives: Great creative concept, clear message and simple storytelling!

Improvements: Editing was well done and the "man on the street" approach was very effective. Next time, consider setting up a more quiet and well-lit setting for better audio. Keep up the great work!

Judge 2

Positives: The blue thumbs are a good creative motif to base your video around. That statistics are presented in a way that's easy to understand, and you didn't flood us with too many numbers.

Improvements: I would have liked to see a different variety of shots rather than all straight-on. Try shooting subjects from the side, in groups, or in other ways. The phrase "I pledge" was also said a few too many times.

Judge 3

Positives: Nice job taking statistics and making it interesting. Composition on talking heads was done well.

Improvements: In the end with all of the talking heads on the screen a couple of the mouths and words did not sync. I felt like all of the heads coming up in the end took to long.