Bronze

The Run to a State Championship

Lake Forest

Documentary

Entry Description

The story of the 2012 Illinois State Field Hockey Champions.

Judge 1

Positives: Good use of b-roll to cover VO. Some interesting shots.

Improvements: Don't use music with lyrics with an interviewer or VO...very distracting. Music too overbearing. Abrupt audio cuts.

Judge 2

Positives: good music choice at top of part 2; good behind-the-scenes feel.

Improvements: pace felt a little slow- maybe a little too much buildup; a title showing the score would have been nice.

Judge 3

Positives: Good rack focus. Good live footage.

Improvements: Splice could be smoother. Music transition choppy at times.