Gold

Life Flashing

Lake Forest

Music Video

Entry Description

The story of a young girl dealing with her dysfunctional family

Judge 1

Positives: Very effective. Intensity of the music matches intensity of the visuals. Good directing. Good shot selection.

Improvements: Nothing glaringly stands out that needs major attention, just minor things that did not overtly affect the effectiveness of the piece.

Judge 2

Positives: The acting was convincing. The editing and B&W elements intensified the drama of the video. Good job.

Improvements: The lighting in certain shots were a bit dark mainly because of the character position against the window.

Judge 3

Positives: There was some really good use of editing, close ups, ad black and white that enhanced the narrative by showing the viewer.

Improvements: This is a really well executed narrative. Some of the edits could have been cleaner, but overall this is a pretty nice video.