Silver

How to be a Hipster

Lake Forest

Demonstration

Entry Description

The guide to all who strive to be a Hipster

Judge 1

Positives: Editing and shooting of the opening sequence were well done. I thought the script was creative and entertaining.

Improvements: The audio was very abrupt at times.

Judge 2

Positives: I liked a lot of the shots. The humor worked well.

Improvements: The editing seemed abrupt and jarring. Maybe that is what you were striving for, but it was a bit too much. Could have used even more of a variety of shots (I'm specifically thinking of the elevator scene.)

Judge 3

Positives: I like the rapid cut sequence. Good editing. Also good use of graphics.

Improvements: Audio needs to be a bit cleaner. Take the time to really refine you audio it makes a big difference. Watch white balance and exposure. The footage looked very grainy at times.