3rd Place :: Division A

Perception

Lake Forest

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

A trailer for the Senior Digital Short currently in production that will be a 20 minute short in May.

Judge 1

Positives: narrative worked well over the imagery. well shot conceptually. music builds to a crescendo at the end that follows the narrative. well done. good contrast of the narrators academic monologue and quieter thoughtful scenes

Improvements: no real comments here. thought it was well done.

Judge 2

Positives: Very intriguing and beautiful piece. Great shots and memorable copy. Makes me really want to see the finished piece.

Improvements: audio mix could be improved.

Judge 3

Positives: Great trailer in terms of keeping the plot of the 20 minute short a mystery. The The images and the narration work well together. Very professional and in a way mystical.

Improvements: At 0:52 the music overwhelms the narration. I'd need a small hint as to what the 20 minute short will be about if I am to give of my personal time to watch it. Give a hint by way of a second trailer or description to accompany the trailer.