Silver

Gaining perspective through a long walk in a beautiful place

Lake Forest

Music Video

Entry Description

A stressed student finds solace on the fairways to provide much needed perspective

Judge 1

Positives: Nice story. Interesting. Not overwhelmingly impactful but it tells a story.

Improvements: The sunrise sunset shot - looks like stock footage. At the beginning the editing seemed a bit confusing for me, trying to follow the story, but then it evened out and I followed what you were trying to say. The song, for me, seemed to overpower the story telling of the visuals.

Judge 2

Positives: Good match of shots with the music. The editing was clean and quite professional looking.

Improvements: Certain spots moved a bit slow.

Judge 3

Positives: This is a well executed narrative that includes a lot of nice technical features (visually).

Improvements: Some of the subplot about college could have been played up a bit more.