Bronze

Dino Boy

Bremen

Humorous Narrative

Entry Description

A boy grows up thinking he's a dino

Judge 1

Positives: This was a creative idea and with the suggestions below could have been much better.

Improvements: Narration was lacking enthusiasm and it was obvious it was being read. Specific shots could have been thought out better to make the story flow more smoothly. Godzilla wasn't a dinosaur! I think more work could have been put into this at the storyboard phase to make better use of an otherwise unique idea. Also, the main character didn't stick with his voice throughout the video.

Judge 2

Positives: I liked the low key delivery of the documentary narration. The timing of the music bed inserts were effective as well. They captured the documentary feel. The colorful characters kept me smiling. It was strange right out of the gate!

Improvements: White balance...always white balance. As soon as I hit the blue, I lost the flow of the video. I like the font selection for the intro, but during the body of the piece for identifiers, I would have gone old school arial or helvetica. It bolsters the irony of the documentary if you play part of it straight.

Judge 3

Positives: Good use of color...lead actor looks the part

Improvements: Narration falls flat...this is a hard one to pull off because it's so far fetched....Dino suit would have worked or somebody missing a hand