Bronze

Pot N' Putt

West Chicago

Commercial

Entry Description

"The Pot N' Putt! You'll never waste a trip to the bathroom again!" An original commercial.

Judge 1

Positives: fun idea and the casting

Improvements: cinematography and editing

Judge 2

Positives: The product idea is a cute gag, the demo sequence is good

Improvements: Show a number of people using the product instead of just one Maybe a before and after sequence of some sitting on the toilet before they have bought the Pot & Put.

Judge 3

Positives: Funny idea. Nice editing, fun music selection.

Improvements: The voiceover could sound a little better; too many popping "p's."