Silver

 

Car Farm

West Chicago
Commercial

Entry Description

"Come on down to the Car Farm for a homegrown bargain!" An original commercial. PLEASE NOTE - Time listed ("1:01") is incorrect! We watched with a stopwatch in hand multiple times before/after uploading. Video is 1:00 exactly but was given an extra phantom second by the youtube gods! :^/

Judge 1

Positives: Soundtrack and character

Improvements: VO a bit scratchy. better location

Judge 2

Positives: Music and voice appropriate to character

Improvements: Character too derivative, make him more unique Have him do more interesting/funny things with the cars - slapstick?

Judge 3

Positives: Hilarious! Great writing, editing, everything. I especially love the "bad edit" with the jumper cables on the Mustang. Great job!

Improvements: Maybe the video quality and lighting could be a tad better, but I really like the spot as a whole.