The story of wrestling coach Michael Collins
Positives: Like footage in beginning and transitions used. Liked the lower thirds.
Improvements: Coach was too profiled for interview. Audio pops and dips. Hard transitions in audio at times.
Positives: energetic music; nice shots of the coach on the job.
Improvements: weird transition between wrestling shots; wrestling footage probably should have been zoomed in; mic hits in the interview.
Positives: Good uses of live footage. Good mix of wrestling and interviews.
Improvements: Splice could be smoother in opening scene (music sounded skipped). Uneven sound.