Silver

One Retreat Promo Video (Lake County)

Vernon Hills

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

PSA promoting a local Christian organization.

Judge 1

Positives: Well done on a high-energy promo and being bold in your faith. You put together a good piece that showcases the organization and students that attend this event. As a fellow Christian who also leads a youth group in Lake County, I can appreciate your approach and effort!

Improvements: Next time, consider including student interviews and testimonies to help enhance the credibility of your project. It will also help you become a more effective visual storyteller. Keep up the good work!

Judge 2

Positives: The photo montages mixed with video showed a great variety of goes on at One Retreat.

Improvements: Some of the text didn't seem to add to the video: Maybe try having the text be more informative rather than descriptive. Try making the photo montages more paced to the music.

Judge 3

Positives: Nice transitions. The shot with the hands was very nice.

Improvements: transitioning the photos with the beat of the music works nice, I noticed these transitions do not sync with the music very well. Their was no info on who to contact or what to do after watching the PSA.